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The Audacity pours on the metaphors

"The secret to success: find something people do for free and charge them for it."

The Audacity pours on the metaphors

The Audacity is still getting a feel for itself, but one thing’s for sure in its second episode: This show loves a metaphor. Locked doors, storage rooms, characters snooping around and fishing for answers: If there’s a service that Duncan Park, Carl Bardolph, and their Silicon Valley peers have turned into software, chances are The Audacity can find a way to symbolically represent it onscreen.

It goes beyond the stuff that’s integral to the developing saga of surveillance and privacy violation at the center of the show: In “Shine Brightly,” a motif of the physical world reclaiming things from its digital counterpart emerges. Father and daughter go out for burgers and shakes rather than summoning them via delivery app. (And if dad happens to run into a potential new business partner while they’re there, that’s just gravy.) The next, just-deserts turn in the VA plotline involves Duncan learning that some of the data the agency is paying him to handle is still kept on paper. Gary’s record collection plays a pivotal role in the beginning and ending of the episode—though he has much more respect for the original cast recording of Pippin than his digital-native stepson, who tries to saw through a painted-shut egress window with the LP.

It’s possible to read something into bassoon-playing classical snob Orson choosing to ruin an artifact of extremely ’70s, rock-influenced Broadway. But I feel like this theater-geek nod and the climactic needle drop its sets up are more about thematic fit. Pippin is also a satirical allegory whose characters seek control and purpose and whose privileged protagonist chases contentment by guilelessly flitting from one pursuit to the next. None of which is to say that Jonathan Glatzer & co. are going for a one-to-one thing here. There’s violence in the musical, but at no point does Pippin go on a wild goose chase for the person he lured into an unwilling partnership who he’s now convinced is trying to kill him. It’s just that there are some intriguing parallels between the two works that could help situate us in the world and among the characters that The Audacity is building.

Giving us something familiar to latch onto can help, too, and boy oh boy does “Shine Brightly” ever deliver on that front vis à vis JoAnne and Sarah Goldberg. After the premiere chronicled what we can reasonably assume is the latest in a series of Duncan Park panic attacks, my anticipation for the unraveling of his therapist was sky high. And I didn’t have to wait long: One unnerving conversation with Duncan and a broken window later, JoAnne is in tatters. Goldberg is in fine, back-half-of-Barry form here, couching armchair sleuthing, criticism of Orson’s eating habits, and landlord grievances in the same, sniffy tone during the scene with the police and melting down into a frantic, paranoid mess as JoAnne tears her office apart on the hunt for hidden microphones. 

When JoAnne tries to persuade hapless, ponytailed Pat at the bank to wipe out her legally dicey stock purchases, Goldberg hits her dissembling peak. She has this way of projecting confidence while simultaneously showing the gears in her character’s head spinning—a little facial twinge here, a hand on the back of the neck there—that just cracks me up. All the cuts back to to flummoxed Pat and the writing of the scene pitch in, too. I’m all in favor of The Audacity making a running gag out of testing what, exactly, is covered by doctor-patient confidentiality.

Of course, with the emotional fireworks already going off in episode two, I have to wonder how The Audacity escalates from here. (I suppose it also gives Goldberg the opportunity to work in more varied gears as the season goes on.) “Shine Brightly” counteracts this rush to manic heights by taking a more leisurely approach to paying off the climax of “Best Of All Possible Worlds.” And it makes some weak choices in doing so: The A-plot this week is rooted in the sort of misunderstandings and dramatic irony that would immediately clear up if the characters involved would just talk directly to one another. Granted, JoAnne has a solid reason for not taking Dunacn’s phone calls, and from what little we know about Orson so far, he doesn’t seem to be the type who’d cop to throwing his mom’s client’s stolen tungsten cube through a window. It’s funny for Duncan to tail JoAnne to the library where she dumped her ill-gotten gains only to conclude—thanks to the raw data provided by Harper’s algorithm (dubbed “The Eye Of Gnodin” after some quick spitballing) and good old-fashioned snooping—that she was shopping at the gun store across the street. But the rest of “Shine Brightly” proves The Audacity is capable of cleverer—if somewhat cutesy, like Oliver pulling the Pippin move of closing the curtains at the end of the episode—material.

Take this thesis statement from JoAnne, for example: “Information is not insight.” This is the fatal error of the Silicon Valley era that The Audacity satirizes, and it’s all over the second episode, whether it’s Duncan’s questionably responses to Gary’s neuropsych evaluation or the “I need a gun” conclusion JoAnne and her guilty conscience jump to because of an assumed break-in. These are not characters who stop and interpret what’s going on around them to form logical, informed takeaways. That would mean slowing down and accepting redundancies and inefficiencies, like those that Carl rails about when JoAnne prompts him to use a mnemonic where the first letter stands for the word that is the mnemonic. 

We’re delving back into metaphor territory here, but so many of these characters go about their lives like the self-driving taxi that Tess glues a traffic cone to. They see an obstacle—be it Duncan’s blackmail, the failed Hypergnosis acquisition, the deal with the VA—and process it as such. There’s no second thought as to whether it’s actually there, actually impeding them, or actually posing a threat. The chain of logic proceeds to the default answer—“Duncan broke into the house,” “JoAnne’s trying to kill me”—and they glitch out, making their problems everybody else’s problems too.

Those are some prime conditions for comedy. And that’s where The Audacity is surest in its voice thus far: an arch, mordant sense of humor. A house style for punchlines is falling into place, in distorted idioms like “cheaters never lose, and losers never cheat” or oblivious one-liners like Martin saying “you’re in a bubble—you have no idea what teens today are going through” to Tess, a teenager who is, indisputably, going through something. That feel for the absurd continues to fill out the show’s world, from the bullshit artists hawking 15-minute mentorships alongside Carl on WynningIdea or the assortment of colorful personalities focus-grouping Jamison into a Stanford admission. 

These are some of the darker corners of “Shine Brightly,” too. We don’t get a long enough look at the manosphere-coded influencer Orson watches to learn what poisonous ideas he’s planting in his viewers’ heads, but we definitely hear the new principal of the kids’ school, Dr. Webb, ask about a locker covered in Post-its, stuffed animals, and a deflated heart balloon.

“That was for Lacy. Last year, she was one of the ones who put herself in a Caltrain’s path,” says the janitor, Bill.

“Take it down, Bill, or else they will all want one,” Dr. Webb says. Bleak.

The Audacity is giving itself quite the challenge by folding the travails of Tess, Orson, and Jamison into its main narrative. Best case scenario, we wind up with a “sins of the father” arc akin to what The Americans did with Paige; worst case, we’re in episode-padding Dana-Brody-on-Homeland territory. However it turns out, this does feel like the likeliest spot for a little humanity and sincerity to take root beneath the show’s sardonic surface. Their parents are utterly corrupted, but there’s still time for the kids to save themselves. They’re not shining examples of virtue or morals by any means, but Tess and Orson come by their respective kleptomania and voyeurism naturally, as opposed to adopting them for purposes of power or optimization.

To a smaller degree, “Shining Brightly” humanizes Duncan too. After wrapping up the not-entirely-above-board evaluation with Gary, he opens up about his late business partner, Hamish, offering disclosures that are sociopathic (the name of their first startup, Fahfa, came from Hamish stuttering through “fuck you”s) and disarming (he feels adrift without his professional other half). The latter drives his behavior throughout the second episode: His marriage is hardly a partnership anymore, and his phone call with Anushka about the VA deal has all the pep-talk and explanatory markers of a conversation between collaborators. A team-up is all he’s looking for from JoAnne, either as a co-conspirator in corporate espionage or as the conduit to a new Hamish. It’s almost as if he’s using her as both an extension of The Eye Of Gnodin and a human LinkedIn.   

Stray observations

  • • But speaking of metaphors that didn’t originate on the computer: Did Gary buy that pistol for JoAnne at a place called Chekhov’s?
  • • I think the Hamish material is important to “Shine Brightly,” but so help me, The Audacity, if your seventh episode is a flashback to Duncan and Hamish meeting in college and/or founding Fahfa…
  • • A rich detail in JoAnne’s coverup scheme: It still hinges on something she learned about in session with a client.
  • • “Shine Brightly” was co-written by Semi Chellas, the Emmy-nominated late-period Mad Men staffer who co-wrote one of my absolute favorite episodes of that series, “Far Away Places,” the scrambled timeline of Peggy walking a mile in Don’s shoes, Roger dropping acid, and Mr. and Mrs. Drapers’ momentous trip to Howard Johnson’s.
  • • Top-notch advice from WynningIdea: “The secret to success: find something people do for free and charge them for it. Now you’ve got a business.”

Erik Adams is a contributor to The A.V. Club.    

 
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