The Ruins (2008)
Crimes:
- Losing the impact of Scott Smith’s pulpy bestselling horror novel by rushing through the setup and the character development, turning the film into another generic creature feature full of interchangeable monster-bait characters
- Having too much in common with the contemporaneous run of xenophobic white-tourists-die-in-scary-foreign-countries horror films
- Being unfortunately pretty laughable, because of the difficulty of making killer vines scary
Defender: Director Carter Smith, editor/second-unit director Jeff Betancourt
Tone of commentary: Interview-y. The chatty Betancourt serves as something many commentary tracks could use: a facilitator who draws out the more laconic Smith with journalistic questions about his intentions and experiences. Barely 90 seconds into the commentary, Smith exults, “You’re such a good interviewer! I’m impressed!” Many of Betancourt’s questions seem like gentle softballs and invitations to praise people—for instance, he asks whether bestselling The Ruins author Scott Smith was “really precious” about his writing and balked at changing his story to accommodate the film. (Carter Smith cheerfully reports that no, he was game and understood the process.) Betancourt’s questions are pretty basic and surface-level, and in some cases, it’s hard to believe that he actually cares about the answers, particularly when he asks whether an onscreen windlass is made out of wood or metal. But at least he keeps the commentary moving along whenever it lags, and keeps the topics diverse.
What went wrong: Test audiences hated “that whiny bitch Amy,” one of the four leads. (Betancourt explains the idea of test screenings.) It was difficult to maintain consistent lighting for all the outdoor scenes using natural light, though the sun was low throughout the day because of the season, which helped. (Betancourt explains that artificial lighting is often used on films, even outdoors.) It was difficult to shoot in the dark, and Smith was concerned about the focus and the anamorphic lenses: “Thank God our focus-pullers are as talented as they are,” he says. (Betancourt explains that anamorphic lenses need more light.) It was hard to believe that the characters would venture into a hole in the ground with a killer plant after seeing what it could do, so some scenes had to be reordered. (Betancourt explains how editors use index cards with scene information written on them to keep track of scene order as they’re cutting things together.) Endless sequences of characters going up and down a well shaft were boring and got cut. (Betancourt explains about how old films used to include “shoe-leather scenes” where characters would just travel from place to place, but that modern pacing elides such things.) This is Smith’s first film, and at times, it feels like he and Betancourt—especially Betancourt—are delivering a Film 101 lecture.